Thursday, December 4, 2008

My first story inked...(A simple short luv anecdote)

PEARL OF LOVE…  
The story of Krishnaveni and Shiva

Background:
Shiva was the only son to his parents...He had three sisters and belonged to a middle class family. He did his schooling and college at his place for he always wished to stay with his parents.
As he topped in his college, he secured admission into BITS, situated in arid areas of the northern part...Though he wasn't interested to move to such a queer place, situations around forced him to land up in this decision.

Journey to BITS:
The white ray of light split into five colors shaping the life's discrete prism, for each year imparted a unique color to cast soaring dreams of Shiva’s solitary soul into blossoming curve of success.
In his five yrs of graduation, he realized Bits to be a stairway to heavenly abode in attaining the spectral showers of success.
Though graduated from deemed university, Shiva did not prefer any enmeshed white collar jobs and wished to live a simple happy life with no tensions, away from this life’s busy zone.
He always had dreams of living a composed and organized life. He dreams of a promised-land irradiated with placid suave thoughts and where money is not the issue, only loving warmth would be coherent in the tissue.
On the other hand, krishnaveni was from a poor family...
Her parents worked all day to earn their livelihood...She was a source of cheer to her parents.
Though financial crisis bothered her now and then, she tried to keep herself cheerful with what she possessed. She managed to complete +2 in one of the government colleges.
Krishnaveni has a cherubic face with an angelic smile. Equanimity and sanity were a sign of her’s.She loves music and has a mellifluous voice. Her innate passion towards music drove her to learn classical music.

The Rendezvous and the paradisiacal Love:
During one of the train journeys, a memorable unparalleled friendship was formed when Shiva met krishnaveni, which was pretty different from all other friendship's that he has ever made in his life.
It was an emotional and euphoric moment for Shiva... That few hours, the train was his microcosm where he started sharing his family matters, good and bad and everything that struck his mind at that instant...
Eventually, his affiliation towards her ameliorated as deep as the ocean and his friendship turned into honeyed love. The best phase of love has began for he believed, is this moment when it’s just born in heart.
Though Shiva watched enough love based movies, he knew, to say ‘I love you’ in real time requires great courage. He sat for hours together with his pen poised above the writing pad, uncertain how to evince his feelings in an apt tone and flavor, in the most special way that would be enough for her to admit his love.
He chose to write a special letter, far more than plain glassy words to help put his pristine feelings towards her, which required expressing unfeigned flowing love from the very bottom of his heart and soul.
Nevertheless he succeeded in composing a sincere love letter with powerful but seraphic words in employing his true relationship and conveying his most sublimely thoughtful feelings.
Shiva’s first letter to Krishnaveni started off with these lines (in telugu)...
"Na manasantha mallelu parichi madumaasaalu kuripinchi,vennalatho vanneladdhukunna vasantha soudama..."
Krishnaveni accepted his love for she was highly impressed by the content and the shade used in the letter for expressing his true love towards her.
As a relic of love, Shiva gifted a diamond pearl ring to Krishnaveni.
Shiva always felt turning to krishnaveni when his spirit needed a lift and when he felt he was all alone. He felt she was a great gift towards eternal love. He felt she was a great affluence to share his heartfelt expressions.
When time and space melted into infinity and the world faded away into the endless darkness, all he seeked is the eternal grace of her rhythmic breeze for she possessed that dulcet tones and a rich pastoral reverberating voice.
True love they were in…
Her love unfurled in his tissue and her presence intensified with a warm feel in his heart even while she was miles apart. There was some saccharine language of the soul from either hearts’ that dispensed love and delivered joy to each other.
Their love continued for 3 yrs...Both of them succeeded in convincing their parents for their marriage ceremony. Shiva tied the knot with krishnaveni on an auspicious day, 2 yrs back for a carefree joyride into the dusk.
Shiva works in one of the government services with a decorous pay. And Krishnaveni settles as a music teacher offering private music courses to a group of students. Now they live a blissful life with two loving kids...Sravani and Sravya.
Let's wish all true love stories end up treacly.
DND.

4 comments:

ashish said...

Sweet as it cud get...nothing artificial..no drama..thts wat true love is all about(i guess)...we need some more like tht...good work ranjit

maddy said...

good 1 ranjit!!! really love the pace of the matter!! instantly grabs attention..btw sorry to ask is it a real love story or a fiction? btw good poet u r ...i hav been seeing ur blog for quite a time..

hafeez said...

Awesome ranjith!! All your writings making me read till the end without even caring abt other tasks.. Thts the beauty of ur art :)..
Keep going dude...

Mahe said...

its really good man.. not finding words to describe it.. :)
keep the tempo..